Oppinion on my work? :)?

The first sentence is a run on, you need a period after Amity. "In" should be "into", "cheif" should be capitolized and then a comma after it. "When" should begin a new sentence, comma after "sea" and connect following sentence by deleting "though". "to do anything" is not descriptive and generic, don't use "this will mean". Use a comma after "However", "like wild-fire" is cliche, don't use "that is when", comma after "hunter", "ichthyologist", and "Hooper". Last sentence is a run-on as well. (I'm not beign critical by the way, just trying to help!)